Kevin, there are some nice things going on here. I like how the bass line is walking! However, the bass line does not line up with your chords. A walking bass line should out line the chords and emphasize the root. Work on this for your next revision. 18/20
Kevin, there are some nice things going on here. I like how the bass line is walking! However, the bass line does not line up with your chords. A walking bass line should out line the chords and emphasize the root. Work on this for your next revision. 18/20
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