I have changed the root of the notes to match the chords. I have also changed a few chords as well. I don't really know how to embed, so her is my link.
This is quite late, Kevin. I like the bass line and the drum part is not bad. In this revision you were supposed to consider space. I do not sense a consideration for the use of space here: this song seems to chug along until my ears are finally given a break after it has abruptly finished. 5/20
This is quite late, Kevin. I like the bass line and the drum part is not bad. In this revision you were supposed to consider space. I do not sense a consideration for the use of space here: this song seems to chug along until my ears are finally given a break after it has abruptly finished. 5/20
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