Kevin, the clarinet has created a lot of dissonance and is not always playing the same rhythm as the melody part. Without further explanation, this shows very little effort. Also, your piece ends with a very unusual cadence that leaves the ear confused. You seem to have taken a few steps in the wrong direction. This is also late. I am disappointment. 5/20
Kevin, the clarinet has created a lot of dissonance and is not always playing the same rhythm as the melody part. Without further explanation, this shows very little effort. Also, your piece ends with a very unusual cadence that leaves the ear confused. You seem to have taken a few steps in the wrong direction. This is also late. I am disappointment. 5/20
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